growing up poor

Black rose 🌹🖤

Author

5 years ago

aint got no money my pockets empty, at the age of 4 didnt have friends didnt have any, hoping to get rich by the time i was 20, im 15 now hope my money will be plenty, people around me picking on me trying to keep my cool, they think my raps are ugly wait til i make em drool, they hating so bad that they wanting to duel, they getting so mad they making them selves look like fools, ima keep working hard writing raps everyday, ima get them bills up im gonna get paid, ima have my own studio, ima buy me a mic, ima be even better than mike and ikes, ima get me a man, ima wrapp him in gold, i dont want him if he aint wrapped in a bow, ima get my hair done, ima paint my toes, until i get there ima see how it goes

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Wassup @his_black_rose, Thank you for sharing 'growing up poor' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Black rose 🌹🖤

Author

5 years ago

I am so sorry for the ending

Black rose 🌹🖤

Author

5 years ago

🤦🏽‍♀️