bring back my smile 😘

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take it back oyha it mine i want it 😪 back to me cos you took from me so it mine damn you stole it didn't you? i could tell by the looks you giving me so i say take it back it mine we don't share nothing so don't get to excited cos you took it from nobody damn you stole it now i want it back you couldn't take care of it so you toyed with it it was your plaything soo i couldn't watch you playing with it as a puzzle tryna solve but you couldn't understand it so i want it back it mine you broke it so some pieces are lost can't fill in the space hole 🕳️inside it is deep even pain is better it way worse than death so you sure telling yourself you boss well it mine that hurt so i want it back you gave it scars (CHORUS) SO YOU COULDN'T 😭 BRING BACK MY HEART.YOU COULDN'T TAKE CARE OF IT SO I WANT IT , CAN'T TAKE IT NO MORE CAN'T WATCH IT BLEED LIKE THIS IT HAS IT OWNER... so please 🙏 give me what mine so my smile can come back to me .. without it . it like im a headless chicken got no direction so bring my heart back it mine 💔 one's heart can be broken within the thick of Time soo you broke it (CHORUS) SO YOU COULDN'T 😭BRING BACK MY HEART.YOU COULDN'T TAKE CARE OF IT SO I WANT IT , CAN'T TAKE IT NO MORE CAN'T WATCH IT BLEED LIKE THIS IT HAS IT OWNER

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Smersh DA kid

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @smershdakid.81, We're gonna review your track 'bring back my smile 😘'. Let's get it! Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 We like the bars, well written! Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Make sure to remember your “why” when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Familly Rod Roy B

4 years ago

i like yor hip hop rap

T.blaze 🎶🎙

4 years ago

Keep up the good work 👏 do drop by my new #taste7

pagemoney215

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

👑 Queen Fadzdartist 💎

2 months ago

ILL 🤒 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥