Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @danielnearhood, Here's some feedback on your track 'amazing raps for gods', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best. This track needs a concept that listeners can engage with, try creating a track with more meaning. Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. Great beat choice, really works with the track! We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Daniel Nearhood

3 years ago

I started eating Taco Bell like gel but then I realized I had to crap I tried to wipe my ass then I felt something bad down in my hand all I saw were stains of pain pulled the handle and watched it swirl down the motherfuckin drain Time getting slow heart beating fast pants still down thinking of that chunky brown plast.