Shoe Game
The Zoned Trino172 Plays
•25 Sep 2021
This is the most hardest rap I've done yet. I ran out of breath so many times and I had to restart so many times. I'm pretty sure it was about 27 times I had to restart this rap. FYI. I. not trying to make a career out of this so don't be thinking that. enjoy Le Shoe Game
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Straightenin’ 👌
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hey @thezonedtrino, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Shoe Game'! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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