Snap A New Vein

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Snap A New Vein

im evil ya see everyday im repeated with please pleads to true caging try to slip me a new vacant for a true placement manuver over a flew paging im grown like weed smacked i see well i swim in a an attack a breeze blew away slim grouchness flim pouches all over her house chess hearts nestbseem to be about sex i have it all the time it rhymed so why not im on the side of rock a goodbye latley seems like a new knock redeem for blue plotting papper glob stop begone ya haters jaw breaker raw rock its all with satan christian pause hop to play get gone with statements im evil ya see every day is a call away call the state to create a different shape make it in the baby crate i dont even know how to slip another day parade by the rejoice pray scilence the boys slay high ends of noise i decay so stay in breath spray the cheff versachi i play the best who ronnie im straght in sex who got i played with less who shot me no im raging blessed in deposit noted slim that god sent exploded into a strafe of selected artifacts in safe of disected behearted test expiramental change in recipies know i live large with the best of who made me Ronnie C in the table high fable departed seas at shore like a ship whos godly me at thus rapping cheese blue with the passion cream got a new sherbert did you hear blur word to apear subsurd turfs to change gear whos tamed here nobe us where done with rust breaking free on the other of a cacant sea im noted well as a great mc any day wait see im decay to play fake to breath a date seen so scim i rap arround a rim like an arm in half with 2 slim muscles whos been husting at the park after dark new subject that half will spark inside humanity sharp inna bark like a chainsaw only man to leave earth a new curse a out of the blue birth to a massacre so beautiful its truth hurts in two words i was rich enough to break through for you the truth hurts mom get ya blue purse buy me a dragon with two burst in flames i guess my birth contained a rapping girth that mained my dick and snapping twirling veins

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5 years ago

im evil ya see everyday im repeated with please pleads to true caging try to slip me a new vacant for a true placement manuver over a flew paging im grown like weed smacked i see well i swim in a an attack a breeze blew away slim grouchness flim pouches all over her house chess hearts nestbseem to be about sex i have it all the time it rhymed so why not im on the side of rock a goodbye latley seems like a new knock redeem for blue plotting papper glob stop begone ya haters jaw breaker raw rock its all with satan christian pause hop to play get gone with statements im evil ya see every day is a call away call the state to create a different shape make it in the baby crate i dont even know how to slip another day parade by the rejoice pray scilence the boys slay high ends of noise i decay so stay in breath spray the cheff versachi i play the best who ronnie im straght in sex who got i played with less who shot me no im raging blessed in deposit noted slim that god sent exploded into a strafe of selected artifacts in safe of disected behearted test expiramental change in recipies know i live large with the best of who made me Ronnie C in the table high fable departed seas at shore like a ship whos godly me at thus rapping cheese blue with the passion cream got a new sherbert did you hear blur word to apear subsurd turfs to change gear whos tamed here nobe us where done with rust breaking free on the other of a cacant sea im noted well as a great mc any day wait see im decay to play fake to breath a date seen so scim i rap arround a rim like an arm in half with 2 slim muscles whos been husting at the park after dark new subject that half will spark inside humanity sharp inna bark like a chainsaw only man to leave earth a new curse a out of the blue birth to a massacre so beautiful its truth hurts in two words i was rich enough to break through for you the truth hurts mom get ya blue purse buy me a dragon with two burst in flames i guess my birth contained a rapping girth that mained my dick and snapping twirling veins

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5 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

5 years ago

Yo @ronaldcarr, It's time for us to take a look at 'Snap A New Vein'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ŸŽง The bars could use a little improvement. Try writin' in different places to get the dome poppin'. Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ŸŽถ Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ŸŽผ The effects you've used make the track stand out, nice job! โญ Laaaaid back! We're feeling the chill on this one. ๐ŸŒŠ Love the feelgood vibe of the autotune over this beat, keep it up. Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: On point ๐ŸŽฏ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: On point ๐ŸŽฏ

I feel it! ๐Ÿคœ๐Ÿค› Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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