Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @krystolswartz, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'smiling back'! 💥 Your vocals sound fire, great recording on this! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. 🎼 We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Krystol Swartz

3 years ago

some day I'm gonna wake up alarm clock ringing them little birds singing my phone pinging I'll go to the kitchen wash the dishes I'll make some food it'll be delicious but then I wake up depressed in my bed wondering when my life will end just laying in my bed staring at my sealing just thinking, waiting staying in my bed all day . I just feel pain but its okay I'll smile back. I lack confidence in myself it tears me apart every day 24/7 depressed angrey waiting for it all to end I just feel pain but I promise it's okay I'll smile back.