Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @onekidsong, It's time for us to take a look at 'I hope'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Vocals just a bit too loud on this one, try turning them down a bit! Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. 🎼 Now this is a track that just encourages the chill vibe! 🌊 Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Onekidsong

3 years ago

I hope I hope my life my life I could become a better person but I can't be anything I'm just a piece of trash like my past but I wish I could be better but I never will accomplish everything the only thing I will accomplish is a failure yeah yeah I hope I hope that I can be something anything that is good I'm just a piece of trash like my past I want to be something but I can't be anything yeah yeah I want to be something but I'm just trash like my past I can't do anything yeah yeah I hope I hope that I could be something anything that is good I'm a piece of trash like my past I want to be something but I can't be anything I hope that I that I could be something but I'm nothing