Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @laydencambry! Thanks for sharing 'Jayceon Official song' with us! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix! A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. ✔ There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

laydencambry

3 years ago

OK OK OK yeah get a check knock out because you’re so ugly and get the water spam I have a knock you out Jake Pepe with me I don’t care because that’s actually your paper ha ha yeah that’s true what you can get my PS five knock you up ha ha eat a get glass and knuckle 088 glass I hit you with a picture with glass it yeah yeah get the big chair and knock out you hurt so bad because you look Ugly you too ugly because the girl smack you you smack me with your hands I smack you on my face boy you can’t do nothing because I am honored I got done so my hips a Rico my hips Tayser in the middle of my hips you can’t do nothing I’m like a police officer ha ha ha ha ha ha that’s what you get bro