Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @trfenfzyzy, Here's some feedback on your track 'Damage (11:21:03)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! 🤙 Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Tariq Allen

3 years ago

Hit yo bitch from the back, put her in my pocket save her for a snack, yeah that’s my chopper, does it smack? It smacks so hard you won’t have time to react. If a nigga want smoke put em in the past. I put his whole team on that’s a fact, niggas want then I blast. It’s dangerous out there watch your back. Snipers pointed on him him clean, he wasn’t thinking right, lean messed up his spleen, he off the green or Promethazine, don’t even brains fell out. Wiped him clean. I was up in the cut with the Mac. These niggas want smoke that’s a fact. Being a rapper dangerous, hell yeah, if these nights pull up gotta keep that stack. Hit yo bitch from the back put her in my pocket saved her for a snack, yeah that’s my chopper, does it smack? You wanna see better step yo ass back.