automatic sporadikbarz

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @hgfyinbip0! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'automatic sporadikbarz'! 💥 A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Great video quality here, defo keep using whatever you're using. 🎥 The video is a bit shaky thou. Try staying on the camera all the time. You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Gavin England

3 years ago

@50flames