Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @keenanapril, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Pick Up The Pen (11:10)'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Almost the perfect mix, just take those vocals down a little and we are good to go. Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Good choice of beat! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Keenanapril

3 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.