Khaya Ntshingila

King Laanie

Khaya Ntshingila
King Laanie

15 Plays

22 Sep 2021

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down

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3 years ago

Yo @khayantshingila! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'King Laanie'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down

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