Rhythm Jones
25 Plays
•21 Sep 2021
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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need to fix up your mike
Hi @princetonjones! Welcome to our feedback of 'Rhythm Jones'! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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