Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @johnathandurnin! Thanks for sharing 'Make It Happen (05:35)' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Johnathan Durnin

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.