MONEY (13:38:34)
Deadshot__ Flick13Little girl across the street Waving hi at right at me Give her a smile Give her a wave Go over there and behave Livin livin livin Like a man Do you know my name Livin life leave me as I came 123,456,789 bang Beatbox
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Hi @deadshot__flick13! Welcome to our feedback of 'MONEY (13:38:34)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try improving your recording quality if you can. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Little girl across the street Waving hi at right at me Give her a smile Give her a wave Go over there and behave Livin livin livin Like a man Do you know my name Livin life leave me as I came 123,456,789 bang Beatbox
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