Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @marwanibrahim.9710! Waddup - let's take a look at 'lames'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Marwan Ibrahim

3 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down