Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @amira_cutie858! Welcome to our feedback of 'pick up the pen'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. We think your improvising could do with some work, just a little practice and you're there! Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Amiralilrappr

3 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.