Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @joseruiz.1115! Welcome to our feedback of 'at the park '! Good choice of beat! The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jose Ruiz

3 years ago

Ayo, I’m too fly, I should be where the cloud at, Only good vibes, You should try that, I got a good view, The ocean clear from up here I can see through, That’s why the sky's blue, So let the sunshine, We watch the sunset, Another summer night, The moon light is next, Yeah, I’m so amazed when I star gaze, Look, If they could talk I wonder what they say, huh I guess I’m caught up in the moment, As time fly, the sun rise Before you know it, You only live once you gotta enjoy it, After the summer leave, Then it’s autumn leaves, look, Before you know it, it’s December, So let it snow, It’s the time for the winter, They say April showers Bring May flowers, Well I’m a give ‘em to my summer When it’s time for her, Them good vibes