wolves&sheep (test recorded 1st try)
👑KingJax👑63 Plays
•16 Sep 2021
(1st rough test recording gonna do a better one soon) 🤞🏼Beat artist- (artsound prod.) Beat- (On A Bless) WOLVES&SHEEP REC•@ (4s-5s) (12-13s) just a drug addicted younginin raised by drug addicted youngins smoke up till my thoughts a blaze drink up till my feelins fade pop some pills ta numb the pain gotta ease these thoughts there runnin ramped in my head save me before they leave me left for dead anxiety rushin chargin head on so strong knock the breath up out ya chest maybe leave ya left ta rest good shootin tex…….(39s-42s) (29s-42s) (43s) never grew up with the luxury’s of white privlege livin………… 10 in a 2 bed room cockroaches how we livin ever since a young age had ta hustle on and off da block so it’s hard ta keep the nose clean when ur the one putting in the work, doin dirt ya gotta buckle down n stick through even the worst make it work if ya don’t wanna see ya family down n out struggling n sufferin ta make ends meat mouths ta feed, gotta eat (1:15) (1:16-1:18) (1:18) your a wolf wolfs don’t heard with sheep unless ta eat then purge to plurish in the meat like a king with a village flourishing neighboring kingdoms touristing lookin for the reason we’re not on our knees or at least weaking from the hits we seen seen real life nightmares make ya wish for make believe believe in fairytales and fantasy this worlds fulla many oddsys that’ll make ya sit and (wonder……. don’t ya wonder……. wonder…….. don’t ya wonder…x3)
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(1st rough test recording gonna do a better one soon) 🤞🏼Beat artist- (artsound prod.) Beat- (On A Bless) WOLVES&SHEEP REC•@ (4s-5s) (12-13s) just a drug addicted younginin raised by drug addicted youngins smoke up till my thoughts a blaze drink up till my feelins fade pop some pills ta numb the pain gotta ease these thoughts there runnin ramped in my head save me before they leave me left for dead anxiety rushin chargin head on so strong knock the breath up out ya chest maybe leave ya left ta rest good shootin tex…….(39s-42s) (29s-42s) (43s) never grew up with the luxury’s of white privlege livin………… 10 in a 2 bed room cockroaches how we livin ever since a young age had ta hustle on and off da block so it’s hard ta keep the nose clean when ur the one putting in the work, doin dirt ya gotta buckle down n stick through even the worst make it work if ya don’t wanna see ya family down n out struggling n sufferin ta make ends meat mouths ta feed, gotta eat (1:15) (1:16-1:18) (1:18) your a wolf wolfs don’t heard with sheep unless ta eat then purge to plurish in the meat like a king with a village flourishing neighboring kingdoms touristing lookin for the reason we’re not on our knees or at least weaking from the hits we seen seen real life nightmares make ya wish for make believe believe in fairytales and fantasy this worlds fulla many oddsys that’ll make ya sit and (wonder……. don’t ya wonder……. wonder…….. don’t ya wonder…x3)
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