writing words to fill a void
Up in smoke ..my dreams in flames ..burn my throat hurt my vaines ... Dirty flo I'm leaving stains... muddy cup I'm weaving lanes .. Writing words to Fill the void.. read my words to feel my pain ... OG I always kept it real.. I always fucken stayed the same..... Yall faked me and acted like im to blame .... They took my son now look what i became .... Honestly im ashamed.. Filled with demons i cant contain... Yall tryed to break me yet i remain .... I hate to complain.. let me explain im So numb...but I can still feel this pain .... Am i insane ? Every bitch i talk to plays me like im a game.. they just stay till i have nothing for them to obtain ....they swere that im there main then they drop me like im a lame ..... But once i gain some fame yall better stay the same ...... I set fire to the booth.. bitch i breath flames.... Old friends switched up but my brothers never change...
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Up in smoke ..my dreams in flames ..burn my throat hurt my vaines ... Dirty flo I'm leaving stains... muddy cup I'm weaving lanes .. Writing words to Fill the void.. read my words to feel my pain ... OG I always kept it real.. I always fucken stayed the same..... Yall faked me and acted like im to blame .... They took my son now look what i became .... Honestly im ashamed.. Filled with demons i cant contain... Yall tryed to break me yet i remain .... I hate to complain.. let me explain im So numb...but I can still feel this pain .... Am i insane ? Every bitch i talk to plays me like im a game.. they just stay till i have nothing for them to obtain ....they swere that im there main then they drop me like im a lame ..... But once i gain some fame yall better stay the same ...... I set fire to the booth.. bitch i breath flames.... Old friends switched up but my brothers never change...
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ill re record when i have a better place and time thank you all for the positive feedback im sorry its such poor quality.
Yo @NathanRobinette! Waddup - let's take a look at 'writing words to fill a void '! Love the idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Good choice of beat! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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