Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @whitebread2.0! Thanks for sharing 'Damage (07:23)' with us! We like the rhyming, it's tight. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Mike Foster

3 years ago

State of emergency im ducking these streets aint no more playin bra im keepin that heat, yeah. hoping that - troll dont see me just leave --yeah-- its me against the world but imma be free. shit got me crazy its all dissarey. where have my thoughts gone theyve led me astray. where can i go now i pray im not prey .yo. but this the jungle man these crackers dont play. they on the payrole and its kill or be killed nigga-- no pussy shit boy u know you got to stay real nigga --- im steady runnin and buckin but bitch they keepin up. i cant shake em off i just wanna wake up. My mind is torn like a wet paper bag just wanna see clear not live in the past --- its tearin me apart the things that ive done.-- all for a game man tht cannot be won. this shits done nothing but take some good friends i wont see again unless i pretend--well i gotta get back next move is on me whatever it takes i got to stay free. Fake ass muther fuckers never stay true they play the game well but never get through. before they ratin out and rolling like a rolling stone pussy ass fuck boys u better run home. u in the big boy shit kno u fuckin up no one to save your ass now you stupid little fuck! you fucked me for the last time i hope you get to see---all the angels soon bitch thanks to me. still gotta focus shit its almost the end i can see the freedom round this next bend now im just barely outta reach, but imma garuntee ---- after all this shit you aint gonna see me. cause imma be up in the mountains baby lookin down yeah i beleive my other chapters starting now......