Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jamallen! Thanks for sharing 'revanage' with us! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Awesome beat, it really makes your track stand out! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jam Allen

3 years ago

I'm a failure fool I'm everyone's full I'm losing my cold at the ends I'm a loser my number is coming up I've been home by thoughts of event then oh yeah everything I watch you from a terminal you as you travel to ride to your end and I laugh hard at the road at the weight of the world found the veins then oh hey have hate you then gravity the world's so hung upside down I drew first blood I drew first blood I drew first blood of his wife watch heaven dying today I'm going to die here tonight I'm available and I deserve to be dead I've been home for my records my life revenge revenge all I feel oh oh how do I stop for the moment to look at the sun down today that's when the iron hit me that this was revenge revenge and then they love had to send it stolen a pain away we consumed having Sun I drew first blood and through first blood his story how I thieves have been robbed in a murderer thanking me Lord I'm a few breaths away as my lungs finally ripped from this cage the veins oh yeah revenge and I hit hit side level everybody knows that revenge ain't the way to go everybody have a very f****** blessed day