Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @toniclmao! Welcome to our feedback of 'Boneshaker!'! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Cadet Shaver.

3 years ago

Yea yea yea yea-Freddys dead red on his bed spread while i overdose on meds like a meth head im somewhat nearly dead, already gotten head in my bed yea till the fucking feds showed up talking about a style pull-up im the true ruler im a bit cooler then other shooter'd prosecutors, institutors, sixshooters call me a fucking executor im a fucking true predator hol up,Get dropped and rocked cause this fucking plot is fucking blocked by this true part of me im no where near then can be free don't you fucking see that he is bleeding and pleading he was misleading but now im succeeding,So please proceed to be the one out of 7 billion that's bothering me but watchout im conquering. while im conjuring these Rhyme so sit tight tonight bright knight who needs a nightlight talk about sore sight you do not wanna fight o,ight? one slight mistake will be your last retake meet Your maker im a fucking boneshaker also a moneymaker+back breaker. so fuck off troublemaker.