Tbg Jordan2.01
Tbg Jordan2.01

star light

star light

13 Plays

14 Sep 2021

I ain’t tryin' to rush ya But I gotta go The cameras are waitin I’m the star of the show And ain’t none of this scripted It’s a natural flow So go ahead and find a seat But try to take notes Lights camera action Just focus on me Award winning bars Whether written or free This here’s for all ages So Imma keep it PG And calmly drop the mic At the end of the scene

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3 years ago

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

3 years ago

thanks u for supporting me

3 years ago

Hey @tbgjordan_2.01! Thanks for sharing 'star light ' with us! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Good choice of beat! Your improvisation is dope, keep up that lyrical fire. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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