Jayden Smith

Swift (16:16:36)

Jayden Smith
Swift (16:16:36)

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13 Sep 2021

Qeb They say jay you got a bag I see you looking clean I don’t no what you looking at cause it ain’t what it seems I’m still broke living of my mama they like what you mean say I don’t stutter when I talkin I’m livin off my mama had been since I started walking so lean about my pass be you stat talking people in head wana put me in a coffin I’m just 10 years old I dont no what you talking all these kid worrying about money gangs I won’t worry about it I’m not from I’m not a blood I ain’t a Crip all these kid be I’m rlaising kid see it ain’t like ◦

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3 years ago

Yo @jaydensmith.6183! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Swift (16:16:36)'! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! The beat is dope and really works for this track. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

Qeb They say jay you got a bag I see you looking clean I don’t no what you looking at cause it ain’t what it seems I’m still broke living of my mama they like what you mean say I don’t stutter when I talkin I’m livin off my mama had been since I started walking so lean about my pass be you stat talking people in head wana put me in a coffin I’m just 10 years old I dont no what you talking all these kid worrying about money gangs I won’t worry about it I’m not from I’m not a blood I ain’t a Crip all these kid be I’m rlaising kid see it ain’t like ◦

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