Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jordynnbumpers! Welcome to our feedback of 'did me wron'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jordynn bumpers

3 years ago

good no it's not Grandma should you walk in the door before you came to the floor you're super trying to think that's one thing you give me the love and we were so different problems you did me wrong you didn't wrong you did me wrong girl you did me wrong you did me wrong you did me wrong hey I'm on my side I'll just wait I'll just leave you outside I'm not around something you don't want my time super headphones so now you'll neve no don't tell me you don't want more time no it's not Grandma should you walk in the door before you came on a single no floor trying to think that one thing give me the love and we were so different problems you do me wrong you didn't mean wrong you did me wrong you did me wrong girl you did me wrong you did me wrong you didn't mean to sleep the one time