lil jax

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12 Sep 2021

shit lil bro in da head now this nigga dead caught him lurking around the corner he gon het this lead shot him 3 times now all i see is red tryna take the perkies just to numb the brain pops doing 5 years i was going insane cause i was only 12 when he went into dat cell we used to live in hotels we aint had right we had to fight our way ou t of darkness just to get to the light the demons are strong but we still won the fight caught the nigga that sniched on pops in plain sight so i pulled out a 9 and started shooting like it was one of a kind then we saw the feds so we started running i looked behind then i started gunning there was blood gushing all over the flo

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3 years ago

Kenny I was trying my best

3 years ago

boi what da hell boi

3 years ago

Hi @jaxonrainbolt! Welcome to our feedback of 'lil jax'! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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