Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @mardreturner! Thanks for sharing 'placement' with us! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Mardre Turner

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.