Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @elijahwright.2635! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Elijah First Song'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Elijah Wright

3 years ago

yea lil nigga im bout to begin my talk bars so nigga cant even walk ayy