the first but be my friend please
Tayton Updike18 Plays
•07 Sep 2021
hey what's up guys don't know what I'm doing today but try to start it off good hey what's up guys I'm just trying to be like a normal guy but my dad said that I'm not normal no but I try to be so if you don't like my song please just leave I don't want to be rude but thank you for being nice dude to hear my song that makes me happy but school sucks cuz I have to learn like writing us up but it's okay I just helps me out with learning so bye see you guys again soon
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Yo @taytonupdike! Waddup - let's take a look at 'the first but be my friend please'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The beat is fire, nice choice. Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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