life
Ye I've been thinking 'bout what life could possibly be. thinking bout how I lost my only opportunity. wanted to be a star on TV but now I'm in an asylum losing my Sanity slowly losing my grip on humanity. Please ge me out of this hell I can hear the devil ringing his bell I feel like I'm in a cell. There is a war outside people getting shot dead now our fields are red all this shit is still in my head I can't forget its all in my mind I'm losing my sight I'm turning blind which way to go left or right I feel like I'm walking in the night why is there no light nothing to lead me through this hell called life
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Yo @insiniter! Waddup - let's take a look at 'life'! Good choice of beat! Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Ye I've been thinking 'bout what life could possibly be. thinking bout how I lost my only opportunity. wanted to be a star on TV but now I'm in an asylum losing my Sanity slowly losing my grip on humanity. Please ge me out of this hell I can hear the devil ringing his bell I feel like I'm in a cell. There is a war outside people getting shot dead now our fields are red all this shit is still in my head I can't forget its all in my mind I'm losing my sight I'm turning blind which way to go left or right I feel like I'm walking in the night why is there no light nothing to lead me through this hell called life
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