Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @lil_vortex! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Shawty'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

lil_vortex

3 years ago

Hey shawty she my little thoty she cute she blessed any ways i wouldn't care less if she try to phase me i got in a police chase gotta catch my case she wild and she ran into someones base cuz u know shes not a disgrace thats why dont look north east or south cuz i will punch u in the mouth any ways that is my rhymes i just ran out of time nah im kidding every day thinking about life everytime i would say thug life anyways my shawty is fine is hell dont even cast a spell all u would take are just L's