Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @kingvondemon! Waddup - let's take a look at 'TakeMeAway (15:06)'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

kingvon demon

3 years ago

it come a time you got to grow up chest in head up boss up getting sack up mac down bitch pack up get your racks up boy friend jacked up face down bitch ass up gotta smash bruah dont harassh ha get your bands up if u slip n fall gotta stand up