ima do it
Jayden BarnesWake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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Hey @jaydenbarnes.9588! Thanks for sharing 'ima do it ' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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