my first time to rap
AlekS PlayZ GaimSLook, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down
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Hi @aleksplayzgaims! Welcome to our feedback of 'my first time to rap'! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up? Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try improving your recording quality if you can. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down
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