life is hard
Gabriel MoralesLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hi @gabrielmorales.1154! Welcome to our feedback of 'life is hard'! Dope recording, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We think your improvising could do with some work, just a little practice and you're there! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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