Story of my life (First Song)
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•29 Aug 2021
(You aint never gon be a rapper) Shut the fuck up! (Eminem wannabe!) Yeah I'm still better.. Well rhis is the story of me.. it goes like, When I was 7 I used to get Smacked up and facked up and I had to get out before they react to me act. I followed the tracked holes I dug, so I can maybe get out ro be a thug. They come at with me with a 12 guage but it go no slugs. Wait why the fuck is there bugs in your plugs? (AAAAAH!) Damn calm down bitxh I didint mean to sca- Wait you are the police, you gonna bring me back? Please dont officer! I need to tell you the story of my life first! Starting from seven I was beat from rhe heat when they told me to take a seat. By eight I asked someone dor a date but they said I need to lose some weight, (But wait!) NO BITCH NOW IMA PULL OUT THE POW-POW AND MAKE EVERYBODYS HEAD GO BLOW! (AHHHHH!!)By nine I wasnt doing so fine and by dick looked like slime. Now thr lawer is giving me fines for what I did last year with his girl, what I did to her made him curl. He told me to get out and I booked it before the police hooked me and I was finally left be. By Ten I go in the class and everyones name is Sen. Wait why do we need a pen? is it because you wanna kiss men again? (GO TO THE PRINCIPAL!) Fine bitch! If you say shit again you gonna get a stitch! Im so rich but you look like a witch! (YOU MOTHERFU-) By Eleven I felt like I was seven, I gotta teach these bitches a lesson because when I hear their impression it gives me depression. Oh shit now im Twelve and I'm about to give everyone hell because when they sell they probably fell and it started to swell because they got a shell and these bitches cant even spell. Can you not yell, I know youre not doing swell! Oh shit they just hit the bell, GOTTA RUN! (Wait lets have some fun!) I DONT WANNA BE STABBED 10,000 TIMES AND THEN BE TURNED INTO A MIME! Now I'm stuck being Twelve and it sucks becquse these ducks dont give two fucks if I beat them and these chicks wanna eat my meat but im just trying to sit In a seat. IM ABOUT TO START ANOTHER BIG SHOOTING IF YOU DONT STOP! I'm gonna go first drop that shop and then shoot the cop brcause they look like slop! Oh, and just playing guys. You know I love ya.
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Hi @the_rapgod! Welcome to our feedback of 'Story of my life (First Song)'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Good choice of beat! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
also im 12 and I will accept advice. at the end I spit random shit to make fun of rappera that are shit. now I know I have shitty mic so dont make fun
(You aint never gon be a rapper) Shut the fuck up! (Eminem wannabe!) Yeah I'm still better.. Well rhis is the story of me.. it goes like, When I was 7 I used to get Smacked up and facked up and I had to get out before they react to me act. I followed the tracked holes I dug, so I can maybe get out ro be a thug. They come at with me with a 12 guage but it go no slugs. Wait why the fuck is there bugs in your plugs? (AAAAAH!) Damn calm down bitxh I didint mean to sca- Wait you are the police, you gonna bring me back? Please dont officer! I need to tell you the story of my life first! Starting from seven I was beat from rhe heat when they told me to take a seat. By eight I asked someone dor a date but they said I need to lose some weight, (But wait!) NO BITCH NOW IMA PULL OUT THE POW-POW AND MAKE EVERYBODYS HEAD GO BLOW! (AHHHHH!!)By nine I wasnt doing so fine and by dick looked like slime. Now thr lawer is giving me fines for what I did last year with his girl, what I did to her made him curl. He told me to get out and I booked it before the police hooked me and I was finally left be. By Ten I go in the class and everyones name is Sen. Wait why do we need a pen? is it because you wanna kiss men again? (GO TO THE PRINCIPAL!) Fine bitch! If you say shit again you gonna get a stitch! Im so rich but you look like a witch! (YOU MOTHERFU-) By Eleven I felt like I was seven, I gotta teach these bitches a lesson because when I hear their impression it gives me depression. Oh shit now im Twelve and I'm about to give everyone hell because when they sell they probably fell and it started to swell because they got a shell and these bitches cant even spell. Can you not yell, I know youre not doing swell! Oh shit they just hit the bell, GOTTA RUN! (Wait lets have some fun!) I DONT WANNA BE STABBED 10,000 TIMES AND THEN BE TURNED INTO A MIME! Now I'm stuck being Twelve and it sucks becquse these ducks dont give two fucks if I beat them and these chicks wanna eat my meat but im just trying to sit In a seat. IM ABOUT TO START ANOTHER BIG SHOOTING IF YOU DONT STOP! I'm gonna go first drop that shop and then shoot the cop brcause they look like slop! Oh, and just playing guys. You know I love ya.
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