нαя∂ ℓιfє
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living in a ware house Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement,but Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard. I can't afford it
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Yo @sonnynhlanhla! Waddup - let's take a look at 'нαя∂ ℓιfє'! Good choice of beat! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living in a ware house Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement,but Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard. I can't afford it
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