my first rap

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27 Aug 2021

hi my is rhylee I'm 12

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3 years ago

Hey @thekoolaidiwishiwascool! Thanks for sharing 'my first rap' with us! Good choice of beat! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

hi my is rhylee I'm 12

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