quick kiss
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•26 Aug 2021
love can feel forceful one moment you feel like you are a king other times it feels harmful I saw a pretty girl red hair leather jacket my heart ragged in love it felt like she was from above like a dove decending from from heaven so I go say hi she says hi back thank God it was not a shark attack we talk for a bit it felt pretty lit most girls would of split it's almost like she's commit the love that I'm edmiting is rapidly spreading it's not a wedding but I'm sweating and I start to stumble ain't that so humble and then she catches me don't worry darling would you like some tea? I must be dreaming this can not be happening this is all so frightening it happened like lightening I can hear my heart pumping it feels like adrenalin pumping I can't handle this love you know what?, I'll would like some tea a week has gone by and I saw her beautiful eyes my heart was filled with delight it felt like I was gonna cry I mustard up the might to go say hi she's says hi back and it suddenly turns into a date (wait what?) there was no time to wait but I did not know what to do so my mind is dead Wight but she could not wait so what do I say? nevermind she grabbed my hand when she touch me I could barely withstands i could barely stand we ran into the woods on private land and she confesses love to me (hold up what?!) she expects the same thing out of me oh god help me I froze up I know what to say, but I can't spit it up I am to nurves someone help me up I think I need a little check up Looks like I need to play catchup because, jeez this really sped up I don't think I can keep up I need to keep up I really need to speed up because I have no room to make things up I need to make up by saying I love you to i must be dreaming this can not be happening this is all so frightening it happened like lightening I can hear my heart pumping it feels like adrenalin pumping I can't handle this love she is ascending like an angel I'll be forever faithful she is so gracefull my God she's so beautiful I'm so grateful I'll never miss this moment and I lean in for my first kiss. hopefully I did'int miss hopefully she does not diss me she looked all confused I don't think she is amused I might get emotionally bruised hopefully that does go to news then she grabs me then we do a quick kiss
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its not the best but i hope you in joy!
love can feel forceful one moment you feel like you are a king other times it feels harmful I saw a pretty girl red hair leather jacket my heart ragged in love it felt like she was from above like a dove decending from from heaven so I go say hi she says hi back thank God it was not a shark attack we talk for a bit it felt pretty lit most girls would of split it's almost like she's commit the love that I'm edmiting is rapidly spreading it's not a wedding but I'm sweating and I start to stumble ain't that so humble and then she catches me don't worry darling would you like some tea? I must be dreaming this can not be happening this is all so frightening it happened like lightening I can hear my heart pumping it feels like adrenalin pumping I can't handle this love you know what?, I'll would like some tea a week has gone by and I saw her beautiful eyes my heart was filled with delight it felt like I was gonna cry I mustard up the might to go say hi she's says hi back and it suddenly turns into a date (wait what?) there was no time to wait but I did not know what to do so my mind is dead Wight but she could not wait so what do I say? nevermind she grabbed my hand when she touch me I could barely withstands i could barely stand we ran into the woods on private land and she confesses love to me (hold up what?!) she expects the same thing out of me oh god help me I froze up I know what to say, but I can't spit it up I am to nurves someone help me up I think I need a little check up Looks like I need to play catchup because, jeez this really sped up I don't think I can keep up I need to keep up I really need to speed up because I have no room to make things up I need to make up by saying I love you to i must be dreaming this can not be happening this is all so frightening it happened like lightening I can hear my heart pumping it feels like adrenalin pumping I can't handle this love she is ascending like an angel I'll be forever faithful she is so gracefull my God she's so beautiful I'm so grateful I'll never miss this moment and I lean in for my first kiss. hopefully I did'int miss hopefully she does not diss me she looked all confused I don't think she is amused I might get emotionally bruised hopefully that does go to news then she grabs me then we do a quick kiss
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