Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @callummurray! Thanks for sharing 'Waiting-deep' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Callum Murray

3 years ago

Yo, waiting beat ye listen up, muzza on the mic it’s gonna be deep ye, when I spit these bars you know I’m gonna deep it, used to have a girl nearly had a kid and I didn’t know wether I should keep it, just 15 when that shit hit it was hard, dealt with it on my ones coz I had no one to turn to coz the galy was mad, stopped me from seeing the boys, nah tha relationship was bad, too many times a tear fell from my eye tried to hold it back so I sparked my spliff and looked to the sky. Yh, my heads fucked up smokin bud to forget the shit I’m 16 now acting like a tit, on the road in a whip shouldn’t be driving but it feels right the sun drops now it’s night, can’t drink only smoke other wise I end up in a fight, ye that’s my response can either fight or flight and in my mind fight feels right and flight feels wrong, fuck man I need to chill out ahah. Yo pass me the bong ahaha