Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @ngareadevayah! Welcome to our feedback of '𝖑𝖎𝖋𝖊_𝖎𝖘_? (16:07)'! Good choice of beat! The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Ngarea Devayah

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.