Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @tileahjackson! Thanks for sharing 'pick' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Tmoney

3 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.