Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @denzelbrown.2772! Thanks for sharing 'shine on the flo' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

D̷͆eeꓘay

3 years ago

🔥🔥🔥🔥 #freshoutdabank

Denzel Brown

3 years ago

oh ok yup beat so fire im a pimp not a simp you know how it go when I step on the flo shine all eyes on my im on flek