blessed 2 be
I remember the first time I made my mama a promise was so young f***** up in the head had to toughen up even though that was a promise I knew I can never keep. just peep cuz this is deep mama I tried to reach while you tried 2 preach you new he was nothing but a leech he was just like Adam but instead of an apple he grabbed the fruit of your Looms & 2 him they tasted like peaches that's when I knew that promises were meant to be broken if they don't come from the heart. damn that's f***** up mama you put your seed in the middle of your problems you put your whole world on your child's shoulder not onece tinking that in the future she;ll have her own burdens she screams mama please while she begged on her knees let my protector come back into my life with her wrists sliced up in the air god please as time passed by learned what a curse & blessing was now she is blessed 2 be
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I remember the first time I made my mama a promise was so young f***** up in the head had to toughen up even though that was a promise I knew I can never keep. just peep cuz this is deep mama I tried to reach while you tried 2 preach you new he was nothing but a leech he was just like Adam but instead of an apple he grabbed the fruit of your Looms & 2 him they tasted like peaches that's when I knew that promises were meant to be broken if they don't come from the heart. damn that's f***** up mama you put your seed in the middle of your problems you put your whole world on your child's shoulder not onece tinking that in the future she;ll have her own burdens she screams mama please while she begged on her knees let my protector come back into my life with her wrists sliced up in the air god please as time passed by learned what a curse & blessing was now she is blessed 2 be
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Hi @ryders4lifebringsyoutheletstalkaboutitpodcast! Welcome to our feedback of 'blessed 2 be'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Good choice of beat! Your improvisation is dope, keep up that lyrical fire. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
wow nice Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ