Cornelius
Cornelius

diary sad

diary sad

28 Plays

23 Aug 2021

back to the days started bases active never been lazy all the blames kept on me very hot till I steam moving with vim we have to form a team street life day for mind every time I gara hustle till I see the money sign hating no be part of my plan crowd ,slums forming life jorking had to put my head on somewhere for this life chale I swear still saying forgive chale I beg. I go hit chale well said . not struggling for first.but want to be best the just want to put me to test I prove them wrong cause I never vex I get the paper then I flex many insults heard but I no wanna retaliate I no wanna be late I no wanna be blamed am shamed life round like plate I gara hustle for my pay if you are not ready to help don't distract me with your fucking bunch of noise some will love but some will hate is 50 ,50 like dice some times tasty but am still waiting. till am blessed , am still blessed beyond curse . loving my neighbor that is what am ask for greetings no be by force hating but I will never purse I choose my life I will Never tose street life bad , street life sad , sleeping on sacks ,others sacked. scars on my back washing cars Lord I wanna blow crying Lord open my way a long time I have waiting searching , learning to be honest . I have to make it ,I get a better place for my mom. street life bad street life sad sleeping on sacks others sacked but am back am free am Black many wars fought to bring freedom. Lord help me to stand on my toes cause I can't do it alone help me to conquer my foes

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2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Hi there @cornelius.1728, Here's some feedback on your track 'diary sad', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks. We're liking the vibe, just a few tweaks! This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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