Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @kahitonge! Welcome to our feedback of 'unloyal friends'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

𝓞𝓷𝓪𝓼𝓽𝔂 🎤🔒

3 years ago

Keep it up, you got this

kahi Tonge

3 years ago

I like the way you sing. You do it like a thing. I like the way you mad. You do it like a keypad. I like the way you run. You do it like anyone. You find so many people are fun-loving But you, you are mostly unloving I love the way you wear your hair, Spreading your style everywhere. You're like a style fountain. Enough zazz for a whole mountain. You find so many people are like a kraal But you, you are mostly betrayal You're the perfect girl. Leaving me in such a whirl. You find so many people are concave But you, you are mostly slave Aggrivating, slave and unloving, Backstabbing and betrayal too, Are the qualities of you You find so many people are fun-loving But you, you are mostly unloving