Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @therealjaylen! Thanks for sharing 'for me' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Therealjaylen

3 years ago

ye its yo boy jaylen aye aye aye i heard you said my flow is weak it look like you need to brush yo teeth wanna talk about chains lets talk about brains yo chains is fake its the flow for nme its me jaylen been at thid you a new bie i took some time off at this now im back you need to get out my way um finna fly to texas bye ye 2× listen you dont wanna battle me you look like a duck without the pattle now you should get out my way be for you end up on stair case look i heard you was talking tuff where is it now you broke bye bye bye bye bye broke you beed to fly so where maybe higher now im out now scatter haha new bie