Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @01_uLPliT9o! Waddup - let's take a look at 'jjs track'! The beat is fire, nice choice. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jjjj

3 years ago

yuh its lil j enjoy yuh yuh no im not japaneise feed the koy theres a lot of temsion in the room being the new boy you thought it was a nice family you built but you got stabbed in the back sorry dadys not commin back ill help you cuz you remind of me but not really cuz i had nobody to defend me i was gonna fade i prayed but my dismay i was still hurtin liked a girl named kate but still im not okay im in the wrong mental state around my my heart theres an arch my dream was to rich like tony stark but to late my emitions and mind have gone dark im a lost soul soon ill be a dead fossil on friday i drive to costco no dude im not piccaso ima leave leave me alone listen to me or you'll be laying six feet deep theres a legendary sword called Excalibur shut up or you're meetin the end of this 22 callibar ima set out what i deramed to be theres no doubt from me left a job behind was forced to resign mental state