Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @michaelcollier.6295! Waddup - let's take a look at 'shit'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Good choice of beat! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

That guy slim

3 years ago

Rest in peace You Left my life in prices Got me believing the things I see in And starting to see jesus Smell the fresh air but it's raining Starting to feel the pain again Life got me like it's surreal Trying to figure out this shit I feel Instead of keeping it concealed You make me rap rhymes and I'm always on time/ Raised me on a different vibe Was always looking for a sign Here you were the whole time The real one that had my back Matter of fact you were my day one Verse. I said rest in peace You left me in peaces And believing in Jesus The voice of all reason Just like the air I breathe in Never going to concealin When you left shit got surreal They say time heal but this hurt Two years laid at rest I do nothing but my very best Stay on top when the world's coming down Always knew how to round a frown Verse. I said rest in peace You left me in peaces And believing in Jesus The voice of all reason Just like the air I breathe in Never going to concealin When you left shit got surreal They say time heal but this hurt